Wow that was amazing poetry, a great journey like a story with a start a middle and an ending...however i didnt like the ending, i undersatnd you have been through alot but at leats at the end of the day yoiu can still say you love your parents and you trust your bestie enough to share such secrets with her. Not everyone has that... be strong girl, life may be painful at teh moment, but if you are pregnant, are you going to give birth? it would give you something to lilve for, even if it is a child a rape...and do you have cancer, are you going to undergo treatment soon? and i think you should open up to yoru parents sure they may be furious at first but it would be a lot easier to cope with, the gain of a grandchild rather than the loss of a daughter... please give life a chance and be grateful that you had a wondderful childhood.
Katelyn xoxo
kitty_mwa@hotmail.com

Hya i loved your poem i am very sorry you had to go through all this tho :| Anyway as u said keep your head up :) Do the same too love xxx

Heya
this is 1 well writen poem!i no exactly were ur cumin frm bt plz dnt do it!!!sorry 2 ppl if i offend u bt mayb suicide is the way 2 go.she may have tryed absolutly everything to make it beter bt it doesnt alwayz wrk tht way.my peace of advice is dnt give in till u have tryd everything possible kk.to every1 hu wrote a comment on tht its nt the way 2 go u shuld take a proper look at her life.tlin her its nt the way doesnt help hw shes feelin.jst b there as a mate even if u dnt no her k.thts smething tht will help tlin her its her choice tht ur goin ta miss her and tht there are things she can do bowt it.i am 15 and was raped wen i was 14 i got hospitalized for trying to comit suicid bt my best mate showed up i had already hung my slf bst was still alive.frm thn n i have been in councilin nd it has realy helpd i stil gt those feelins tht i want 2 kill my slf bt lee ma best mate has always been there 4 me nd i realize i cant leave hm. i love hm so much.as a friend.b4 u comit suicied be honest wit ur parents mayb write a letter and go on holidae wit a gud mate 2 gve ur olds a cool dwn period frm the letter.i dnt no u bt thts ma advice 4 u.if u wana tlk add me n msn or email me n skate_punk_14@hotmail.com il catch ya later luv kate

Wow! did she really did this? she hasn't wrote a poem after this. she might have! R.I.P. taz. sorry.

Adrian [if ur in heaven u kno me]

Amazing taz! 5/5 Excellent, hey you should check my poems out, you might remember me :), great job. very sad

Omg, that was so sad! it was a good poem tho...just sad :((

Are you still alive i hope so i love it

Holy that was realii deep and emotional
i loved it
5/5
~TaZ~

Hey
Suicide isn't the answer to anything..i have been there soo many times it ain't even funny,i have had friends who has done the exact same thing.mii bestest friend overdosed but she was taken to the hospital, and she threw up all night.i had a friend that just recently,cut too deep and she said that she was soo scared that she didn't even wanna die anymore..believe me..when yew cut too deep and ur bleeding all over yew are gonna wish that yew never did it..i stopped plenty of times when i was trying to do suicide..it doesn't feel good.cuz when yew start to loose breath yew get scared and wish yew could undo everythin.take mii words.suicide isn't the answer for anything..check out mii poem.i think it's called why can't anyone understand me..i have done soo many stupid things to end mii life just b/c i couldn't take anymore of the S**T that i was going through.but i just didn't put everything in the poem.

Very Emotional Poem. Hope You get thru everything.