Holding You

by BrokenMisery   Jul 2, 2005


I want to hold you by my side
Soaking up all the tears that you have cried
From forgotten memories lost in war
Lying inside in darkened awe
Loosing yourself from photo sheets
An album gone as incomplete
My arm around you as I whisper your name
Rocking you gently when I came
Soaking up all the tears that you once cried
I am here, holding you by my side.

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  • 17 years ago

    by silhouette fairy

    Kinda short but amazing it really shows the feelings you have for your friend nice poem keep writing you're great

  • 18 years ago

    by Sabine Taylor

    Beautiful poem that moved me a lot. Also the part with the photo sheets, once I thought at remembering a lost love where the two splitted and then a love which was parted by death, so that means it made me think about it all and that's a very good sign. Great write 5/5 !!!

    Keep it up
    Lots of love
    Sabine

  • 18 years ago

    by jamie ellen

    so much emotion you conveyed everything so well excellent job

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    WOW! That is really great! I really like the ending with how you reworded the beginning but, differently because you were there...5/5! Thanks for commenting on my poems...it meant a lot!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kane Burden

    Great poem! Great imagery used for this poem. Excellent work. By the way, Welcome to the club :D Kind regards from Kane

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