Its Done

by The Poetic Child   Jul 3, 2005


You looked in the line
surprised to find,
my heart,
put it in your cart
like shopping at Wal-mart
thinking u can just by it
take it
easy to break it
and u shacked it
telling u loved me
u faked it
but now,
i ain't going to be the cow
begging and starting to bow
I am tell u straight up
to shut up
and its done
to even know the fact i called u a Hun,
loved u wit all my heart,
u just popped it wit the dart,
and now i got no love,
that i thought from above,
but i ain't gonna sit and cry
I am man ill hold down the cry
u should get re-newed,
i ain't starting a feud,
just letting u know,
that i know,
about your way,
so I'm here to say.
Its Done

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 17 years ago

    by Esther

    Liked the poem n what it said!! but ur structure is a bit dodgey!! u could try havin breaks inbetween lines! Liked it anyway! keep them comin! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    Loved it....
    *loved u wit all my heart,
    u just popped it wit the dart*
    this are my favorite lines...it just popped out at me...

    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by simply taylor

    goodness!! that was really really good. i really liked it!