this is so good i wish i could do as half as you

nice work
keep writting

love it!! that was beautiful! keep on writing cant wait to read more!! please come comment on some of mine!!

Oh my gosh! I love this poem! The emotion expressed is amazing! Great job!

~dandy~

Stunning,

Failed

I love it!
No really,,
I adore it!
Amazing,,
Wow, great job,,

xxx

Great poem I loved it I hope u read a few of mine again ur poem was great

aww..=[ that was so sweet n so sad at the same time. gr8 poem. i hope everything is ok. take care.

much ♥
lost_gurl

good job
i dont normaly like poems with rhyms
but i told myself to give this a chance
i liked it because it didnt fall back on the rhyms
it said something through them.
i relate to it, i feel it.
keep it up
5/5

omg. i like this poem ALOT. it is awesome. great way of writing it and everything. great job. this poem is so touching. i feel this way right now. because i do not know what is going to happen in my relationship but no matter what i will still love the guy i am with. great job..5/5

that was really good

This is a really good poem..keep writing..you're really good at it...you are an inspiartion to other writers..including me.

i loved it!!! check out some of my poems and plz R/C!!!

Very very well written!! I loved the idea and can relate VERY easily!! "I scream on the inside, hoping you'll hear,
You don't even move even though your so near." That, I think, is the best part of the entire poem!! keep it up! 5/5!

I love this poem!5/5

UR POEMS ARE GOOD

GREAT JOB.. i luv the way u express it.. and i luv it soo much its awesome!!!!!

absolute beautiful love poem, so well expressed!

wow that was really nice, good work, u should read some of mine, there pretty good as well...=D

amazing...i am in love with this poem i think its beautiful=) good work=D