This is beautiful. Well Written. I loved the rhyme scheme. Well thought out.

Beautiful imagery! 5/5

Well written and In the right catagory. I never really look at these topics, but Im glad I did. Awsome Job!
Allison

very good! loved it!

I love the idea of this piece. I've never thought of such a thing. Creative.

I got a little lost on the end. Does the poem end with you actually finding out? Did you die in the poem? lol :)

I loved it though!! :)

Very creative idea and beautifully written. It flowed very well too. I loved it! ~Brooke~

u make it seem worth seein more than it is anyway. u've got talent

this poem is beautiful. it really had me imagining how beautiful a sunset is. the imagery and rhythm was perfect. 5/5 great job!

This is great! It's nice to think about what is waiting for us after life on earth is over! Great Write!

you write sensational poems.

This kinda confused me because the poem was about what the sunrise in heaven is like but two stanzas you mentioned having already seen it and this would have worked if both of those stanzas had been at the end because then i could sense that you somewhere along the line had died...but you stuck one right in the middle so it didnt make sense other then that great flow great rhyming greatttt word usage i dont know if its the topics or just your style but eveything seems to smooth and graceful

*so smooth and graceful, not too lol sorry bout that

Beautiful poem! Great job, I loved it.

Saiya