Hey, this was amazing! It was short and to the point and it all seemed to flow! Great job... 5/5

- Thanks for reading and commenting on my poem -

~ Tina

this is so sad.. i hope its not true.. but if it is keep your head up things will get better.. and there are places you can call to get help if you have to.

Im so sorry i hope that you will be happy some day. great poem. chasity. p.s. if u ever want to talk u can write me. love chas

it is true....but I'm fine. Check out my other poems and plz rate/comment them. Thanks:)

OMG... I love ur poems. This is the 2nd poem of urs I read and Im so in love with ur writing. Katrina girl, keep wroting. I admire ur talent. This poem was sad but awesome.

Thanx again for ur comment.

Love
Nana

Dat was a really great poem.

Dude...er sry chick-grab something and beat him back. Crack him over the head when he aint expecting it and kick him a few times for good measure.

that was so sad but still so beautiful Katrina. I loved this one.
wish you eternal happiness,
marjan

So on lonely nights
Or, I guess, all the time.
I'll grab my good pencil
For another sad rhyme.

I like that part. It flows great! 5/5

The only thing not true in this poem, is that my mom commited suicide, I wrote a poem about it..."just like your mother"

wow sounds like you have been threw alot... very powerful poem keep writing

I really love the message behind it... great job, n keep writing

very sad poem, very well writen.. You need to talk to someone about this, maybe a school consler... I am sorry about your pain

i cant believe this is true.........you have been through too much.......praying for you honey......dont give up whatever you do. im here for you if you need me ok!!

very powerful, but hang in there! you have inner strength and beauty...use that to your advantage! never give up, and keep writing!

very well written, keep it up :)

aaaw!! my god, i feel so sorry for u! why dont you report the father to the police?? it could help. i hope your ok. do u hav friends you can stay with?? great poem. stay strong!
luv steph

your life is soooo sad i cant believe that this happened to you I really cant believe it! wow great poem though

omg.... is this true? you should move out..... 5/5

Excellent, emotional poem. You're a very expressive writer, keep it up!
-Kate
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