Yeah,thats how I felt...
getting over depression changed me from doing something like suicide.

Btw here's a hint to cure depression: Love

short but sweet... you got your point across perfectly... great job
i loved the ending and i felt i could really relate to it =)

*jackie*

Your wording is just...excellent. A short one, but done just as well...

My parents do love me dearly, I think I’ve learned to appreciate them more, but I still feel the guilt… I’m sorry you don’t have a real family. You can be fine alone, but you deserve some love and support you parents seem to be lacking in giving to you…you must be strong at least. I guess think of your friends as your family...you're never really alone. I’m glad you liked the poem…

Thank you.

xxx

Thanks sphinx.
ur a great twin
I have a ton of hw rite now too...
But good luck,wats d name of ur school?
Mines sutter....

I miss being carefree....
(the boys here suck.)

~Kristi (Rainy)

I really like this-my own subject matter is somewhat similiar in my work(see last shards of a forlorn hope' and 'And Always I dream Alone-' and 'Square One',I think you could relate to those).Each stanza is very well written, perhaps a bit of revision could help in spots(make it stronger) but overall there's not a weak spot in the form/structure anywhere.And for a short piece you covey not only the messge but rally hit the reader with such emotion.I'm sure many can relate, I know can.But life goes up & down,but it does go on no matter what is going on in our lives, we become stronger going through these bad times.I have a personal motto taped on my computer'Rise Above Your Mood'-it can be hard but it can be done.Sorry got sidetracked,--This really is an excellent piece, I really like the power and emotional impact of the last stanzand the fact you used a rhyme in the last stanza gives it a smooth flow.Take care.

Ah, lala this poem so sadly true for a lot of us, but I'm here for you! ;)

Great Poem!