Comments : Love is where you are... !

  • 18 years ago

    by shawn hoskins

    I thought it was great it hd a nice flow 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Beautiful. I liked all the comparisons they worked well. For some reason the ending seemed to loose the flow of the rest of the poem. This is not good as the ending is the main point of the poem. Overall though, it was good.

  • 18 years ago

    by N J Thornton

    Oh yeah, you said you'd comment on two of mine now. Please read "There go the flying pigs" and...you can choose another one.

    Thanks.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lonely Heart .ღ.

    Beautiful.. your very talented

  • 18 years ago

    by Princess09

    Awwwwwwwwww thts soooo cute. very sweet so many love poems but ur was diff. good 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by carolina

    Hey I like this poem alot it flows nicely too it's really cute
    Carolina

  • 18 years ago

    by xTheEcstasyOfSuicidex

    I'm not much into love poems...but this one I must say, is very very sweet. You're an excellent excellent poet, wonderful job.

    Sheena

  • 18 years ago

    by Geena

    This poem is excellent, so cute too. loved it 5/5.

  • 18 years ago

    by themeuneverseen

    Very good work! Short sweet and to the point! loved it!

    Love
    Haily

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    Another good one! 5/5 Loved it! By the way thanks for that spelling correction lol it was supposed to be accept lol
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashley Van Eperen

    I love the emotion of this poem. it was great...it reminds me of two friends i once had, shortie n pico. :) lol their real names are ashley n manuel, but this reminds me of them so much, and all the things we've been thru...and it makes me wish they still loved me! this was amazing, and i hope that some day, someones going to love u as much as u can love them...

    this was a great write....

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    Amazing poem! you can feel the love as you read the lines. keep up the great work!
    crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiller

    This is a greatly written poem.. I can tell you must have written many poems
    Its truly an amazing poem.. Great poem!

  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I like this alot . keep up the good work. it was good.
    Emma5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Truest Lies

    That was tender and sweet!
    it had the innocent ring of a first love, very nice!

    Good Writing!
    beth

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Amazing job keep up the lovely work. i enjoyed reading both of your poems.

  • 18 years ago

    by Renee

    This was beautiful, I love how all the little things remind you so much of the one you love, and I like how you incoporated this into your poem. You're structure is persistant also, and it's a very easy read. Great job with this hun.

    Take Care,
    Renee

  • 18 years ago

    by Tiny Reader

    The flow is perfect. Easy to read, amazing. Loved it. Great work
    Sarah x

  • 18 years ago

    by TragicRomance

    It was a beautiful poem! GRAT JOB!

  • 18 years ago

    by *Edwin*

    Another good 1 lol dayum ur stuff sounds better then mine...lol...im hatin now lol jp