Comments : Footsteps of an Angel

  • 12 years ago

    by allison

    Wow, Thats such a great poem. Very full of emotion and well written. I really liek it. I relate to it very well.
    Love alwayz Take care
    Allison

  • 12 years ago

    by allison

    Wow, Thats such a great poem. Very full of emotion and well written. I really liek it. I relate to it very well.
    Love alwayz Take care
    Allison

  • wooowww, this poem is really good, it kidna of reminds me of that story footsteps...but in a really cute love wayy...i really like you're wrting style:)

  • 12 years ago

    by David Munoz

    In short, that was really well done. Full Length Version, I too personally accociate angels with love so that really stood out for me. You rhymed well and I really understand how you feel. Keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    what a sweet love poem! just reading it makes me feel really happy inside :) nice job! and thanks a bunch for your comment on my poem, i've been trying to get people to read it to see what people thought of it, so thanks.

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 12 years ago

    by Stacinator

    This one is really sweet, keep it up :)

  • 12 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    omg thats so sweet i know how you feel i seem to think the same things all the time about my b/f....and we'v been t/g/h for alomost 10 months now....great poem....wonderful rhyming scheme and flow was so perfect! 5/5

  • awww. that is so sweet. great job at writing it and explaining your feelings. 5/5..good job
    Crystal
    check out my poems and comment if you can..thanks

  • 12 years ago

    by Alissa

    wow that was beautiful for real I really liked it great job

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie84

    How sweet! As the quote goes if you set them free and they come it's true. Awesome write Ashli....I've read your poetry before and I must say I always enjoy it. This is filled with love and anticipation. I love how you ended it! Reading the title I thought it was going to be sad...lol Excellent write!!! 5/5 :)

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Such a sweet love poem! I am glad to hear your wish came true! Very well written poem! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by undying blusher

    Sweet...I love the ending...

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by =)~ BJ ~(=

    i like this, just so simple about a sweet love, keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by MiMi

    Thats really good i can totaly relate

  • 12 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    I think that is soo adorable! I'm in love and I can't imagine losing him. 5/5!

  • 12 years ago

    by .. !!-D a R r i N-!! ..

    Good Job Ashli!.. this is a poem that would catch the eyes of almost everyone who has been in love at least once in there life. something everyone could relate to.. very nicely done.. keep up the good work ma..

    ..!!-DarRiN-!!..

  • 12 years ago

    by Switchblade89

    excellent poem

  • 12 years ago

    by Italian Stallion

    Wow, amazing poem. I loved it. I deff. can relate to it. good job.
    love ya
    ~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

  • 12 years ago

    by AllHailTheHeartbreaker

    Excellent poem... Very sweet. It's one of the better ones I've read!!! Unique. I liked the story line & how you had the 'if you want it, go get it' theme. GREAT job!!! You're on my favs...
    -Kate

  • 12 years ago

    by Jamie

    This is so sweet, im so happy you were able to get him back good for you.

    What was I doing without you?
    Why wasn't I drowning in your love?

    those are my favorite lines this poem seemed to flow through with an ease and it really had a strong graceful vide around it great job 5/5