Wow, Thats such a great poem. Very full of emotion and well written. I really liek it. I relate to it very well.
Love alwayz Take care
Allison

Wow, Thats such a great poem. Very full of emotion and well written. I really liek it. I relate to it very well.
Love alwayz Take care
Allison

wooowww, this poem is really good, it kidna of reminds me of that story footsteps...but in a really cute love wayy...i really like you're wrting style:)

In short, that was really well done. Full Length Version, I too personally accociate angels with love so that really stood out for me. You rhymed well and I really understand how you feel. Keep it up.

what a sweet love poem! just reading it makes me feel really happy inside :) nice job! and thanks a bunch for your comment on my poem, i've been trying to get people to read it to see what people thought of it, so thanks.

~PLP~ lil slam~

This one is really sweet, keep it up :)

omg thats so sweet i know how you feel i seem to think the same things all the time about my b/f....and we'v been t/g/h for alomost 10 months now....great poem....wonderful rhyming scheme and flow was so perfect! 5/5

awww. that is so sweet. great job at writing it and explaining your feelings. 5/5..good job
Crystal
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wow that was beautiful for real I really liked it great job

How sweet! As the quote goes if you set them free and they come it's true. Awesome write Ashli....I've read your poetry before and I must say I always enjoy it. This is filled with love and anticipation. I love how you ended it! Reading the title I thought it was going to be sad...lol Excellent write!!! 5/5 :)

Such a sweet love poem! I am glad to hear your wish came true! Very well written poem! Take Care! Brooke~

Sweet...I love the ending...

xxx

i like this, just so simple about a sweet love, keep it up

Thats really good i can totaly relate

I think that is soo adorable! I'm in love and I can't imagine losing him. 5/5!

Good Job Ashli!.. this is a poem that would catch the eyes of almost everyone who has been in love at least once in there life. something everyone could relate to.. very nicely done.. keep up the good work ma..

..!!-DarRiN-!!..

excellent poem

Wow, amazing poem. I loved it. I deff. can relate to it. good job.
love ya
~ItalianStallion A.K.A. Joe~

Excellent poem... Very sweet. It's one of the better ones I've read!!! Unique. I liked the story line & how you had the 'if you want it, go get it' theme. GREAT job!!! You're on my favs...
-Kate

This is so sweet, im so happy you were able to get him back good for you.

What was I doing without you?
Why wasn't I drowning in your love?

those are my favorite lines this poem seemed to flow through with an ease and it really had a strong graceful vide around it great job 5/5