what a sweet love poem! just reading it makes me feel really happy inside :) nice job! and thanks a bunch for your comment on my poem, i've been trying to get people to read it to see what people thought of it, so thanks.
omg thats so sweet i know how you feel i seem to think the same things all the time about my b/f....and we'v been t/g/h for alomost 10 months now....great poem....wonderful rhyming scheme and flow was so perfect! 5/5
How sweet! As the quote goes if you set them free and they come it's true. Awesome write Ashli....I've read your poetry before and I must say I always enjoy it. This is filled with love and anticipation. I love how you ended it! Reading the title I thought it was going to be sad...lol Excellent write!!! 5/5 :)
Good Job Ashli!.. this is a poem that would catch the eyes of almost everyone who has been in love at least once in there life. something everyone could relate to.. very nicely done.. keep up the good work ma..