Comments : Voices in my head (might find disturbing)

  • 12 years ago

    by Elizabeth Ann

    *Laughs* how completely psychotic! This was very fun to read. You have an admirable talent for the believable ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lecrissa

    Ok I want one ticket to the funny farm...Lol... this was great.

  • 12 years ago

    by .x. bloodstained rose .x.

    wow thats really good

  • 12 years ago

    by Forever29

    Excellent, sounds like schizophrenia to me. 5!

  • 12 years ago

    by jello

    i really like this poem...it's really good. keep up the good writing.

  • 12 years ago

    by Rocco

    WOW.. I LOVED THIS POEM ITS EFFING AWSOME!! I really enjoyed reading it..

  • 12 years ago

    by Emma

    Great poem. lovein it. New here so please comment my work. yours is so great.

  • 12 years ago

    by Nissreen

    This poem is soooooooooo spooky and awesome

  • 12 years ago

    by Fighter

    wow...amazing!!!! so dark and twisted. absolutely amazing! keep it up.
    -xXx-

  • 12 years ago

    by bneathxmyxeyesx3

    Very emotional. I could picture how you described every detail. Job well done!

  • 12 years ago

    by mrs.hottie56

    I really like that I have a sister that says stuff like that

  • 12 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    freaky... i loveed it!

  • 12 years ago

    by LeXi

    magnificent!! i love it... beautiful

  • 12 years ago

    by **NoT R3Al 2 y0u**

    it was meat i dont think i herd things like that good job i gave u a 5

  • 12 years ago

    by Erin Smith

    this poem is kick ass man, keep it up!...love always ~erin~

  • 12 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Your wordplay has great effect. The imagery you create is tangible. A work of art. I am glad to have had the pleasure of reading this.
    Most certainly a 5.
    Peace, love and empathy.

  • 12 years ago

    by Br0k3N

    I love your poem, your right it was some what disturbing ..but i think it was amazing.:D

  • 12 years ago

    by mandi

    this poem was amazing i loved it!
    xoxo
    mandi

  • 12 years ago

    by TORN

    hey this was great

  • 12 years ago

    by SiCK N TWiSTED

    omg wow..i relle liked it, n i didnt find it disturbing..is it true?