No offense, but what the f u c k??? Good poem, I loved it. Is it true? 5/5. Keep up the good work. I get it's about suicide, but them, who are hey. NVM! I'm dumb, but if you could e-mail me explaining it EXACTLY....
BABY_DENNIE@HOTMAIL.COM.
you're a great writer!

This was an...interesting poem! I liked it! I can't wait to read more of your stuff! Keep it up and good luck in the future!! Please try to check mine out!!

omg awsum !! i loved it... not disturbing really cleaverly written Xx

OMG!!!! thats scary!!!but great job!!!

wow dats bloody ace!!!!!!!! ur well good! mine r nothing like this but check them out u might like them! lv ya cez xxx

LOVE IT!!!!! :) hehehehe i have voices too hehehehe

wow! great job 5/5! i luvv it!

oo scary.. i lyk it.. twisted.. kool.. keep it up
take care
nouna

woaha....that was insane...really chaotic..but love it! "hehe"
-mikki

woooooooooooow. excellent.

wow...i thought i was the only one feeling that way...halla at me...skiiia@yahoo.com

Disturbing..yes...Great...VERY! It's an awesome way to describe something that's looked down upon! 5/5

Chilling! I hate those voices! They always tell me to do things, bad things like the ones in your poem.

DUDE! That was... Awesome... I love it. It's so amazing. I know it's weird to hear voices and all and i hope you really don't but it's like.. WOW... I love this poem. It's the Sh!t:D *hugs* Keep up the good work sweets.

~Jessica

Really awesome poem.

Fun but dark at the same time...i love it

LIKED IT, I FELT IT WHEN I READ IT!

Like ur poem. sounds likes me. but there r more then 3. hope to talk to u.
hope we can be friends.

take care
~ Jesika

Thats really good...i actually enjoyed that, really good job...

Interesting poem. In a good way. Very. It was good.
Nana

WOW OH MY GOD that was such a great pshycotic poem you should check out mine called lunatic