Comments : I Know This Hurts, It Was Meant To

  • 18 years ago

    by Toni

    I think this poem is excellent, it sounds like it just sort of flowed out? dont know if it actually did? But its so brilliant, and flows so well. I know you said u wern't sure where it came from, but it sounds like you had things you needed to vent? Ooh maybe i'm all wrong, but it is truly truly excellent. Take care you xxxxxxxxxx love u

  • 18 years ago

    by **Just Her**

    This is amazing... its so profound and mature.. your poetry is so wise! This was excellent! I loved every single line espcially
    "You're a deeper shade of desperate"
    anyways hun take care:)

  • 18 years ago

    by PinkLaces

    Wow, Well Done!!
    (I'm a very big fan of your work.)

    Failed

  • 18 years ago

    by mkhoviyeun

    great poem! i like it-like it! 25/5! =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Mat

    That was pretty good.

  • 18 years ago

    by Beebee

    Awwwwww

  • 18 years ago

    by BrisseyLad

    Hey Ironic Allure © i havn't been on this thing for ages and your one of my all time fav's and just had to read something new you wrote and Wow its gr8 to see you havn't lost your touch ur very talented I'd gr8ly like it if you read my new one :P

  • 17 years ago

    by limp

    It hrtz hw hdsly bad it iz.