i loved this soo much!

i really loved they way you wrote this. i know what it feels like to only feel happy when you visist your fathers grave. you did a great job on this poem.

Dude this too brought tears to my eyes and chills up my spin dude.... And sorta of in a way I understand but like in a diffrent way. But you did an excellent job and the way you wrote it was perfect... You are a very talented writer, well done... LaTerZ

Hey, that was a sad thing to go through, i am sorry, even though i cannot help, but i try n my best ways to make people happy...Nice peom :)
Good Luck

thank you all so much. i really appreciate the comments. ill return the favor asap.

just think, your dad would want you to be the happiest you can be. I mean, he took your abuse away. And in doing so hurt his-self because im pretty sure he loved your mommy. But this is truly a sad poem. And one to be read many times more. i dont mean to assume on this comment, but this poem is pretty explainitory. Its beauitful. and sad all in one.

-courtney