Cloud

by ღ Christina ღ   Jul 13, 2005


This cloud
Can feel invisible
Because you can’t see
It in the blue sky
This cloud
Becomes angry
With blowing winds
Wanting people to die
This cloud
Feels happy
All smiles and joys and
Disclosing no pain
This cloud
Can feel sad
Tears falling down
Falling as rain

.: I dont know why I wrote this, but if you notice the cloud stands for something :.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Johnny Marlin

    Awesome poem, I really likes it. Thanks for the comment, take care

  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    pretty

  • 18 years ago

    by ---AL---

    I love the methaphor of the cloud. It truly makes this a clouded wonder, by keeping the reader guess while enjoying a good read. good job

  • 18 years ago

    by ...:NiKi:...

    i think the cloud stands fer a person, prolly u, am i rite?!? lol well great job once again, ur a great poet! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by erikka baby

    This was very good, it's different that other poems I have read, but it does have a message in it. I loved it! Xx Keep up the great work! I'm adding you to my favorites.

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