Comments : To My Unborn Child...

  • aww. that is so sweet. amazing poem. is true? do you really have a son on the way? if so congratulations. great job at writing this poem. plz check out mine if you can one of them is called every other day. thanks..awesome job!! 7/5

  • 12 years ago

    by undying blusher

    That is so wonderful...the poem has excellent rhyme and flow...that was just lovely....heartfelt....

    xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by Sarah Ann

    Awww...that was an excellent poem, congratulations if this is true..I know your baby will always bring you happiness. Take care xxx

  • ok matthew i just had to ask..it is still an amazing poem though..lol..

  • 12 years ago

    by Randi

    That was beautiful. I wish I could put my feelings into words for my unborn child, but I cant. You're amazing for being someone who can. Im sure you will make a wonderful father...

  • 12 years ago

    by Teresa

    this is a great poem for i am expecting myself so i know how you feel, the father doesnt know yet but i hope he turns like you because you sound like a great, sweet, loving father and husband.

  • 12 years ago

    by Samzy

    one word while going throught my mind reading this :awesome!! ur a good writer and ur going 2 be the perfect father, i dont kno my dad but im glad that your son will always have a father to look up 2

  • 12 years ago

    by Liz

    omgosh i absolutely loved it!!absolutely NOTHING to critisize about.. i am truely happy for your son and i know hes got a great dad!! ~liz

  • 12 years ago

    by ©TheCornerOfTheEnd

    wow....thats was absolutely fat (good) lol can i ask u a question coz i dont no my dad .......er will u b my dad plz coz if u read sum of my poems u will understand how i feel bout fathers u u and a roll model 4 all me 2 look up 2
    xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx tazza
    good luck in the future

  • 12 years ago

    by xღxBeckyxღx

    Hey, great poem, keep it up! xxx 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by ღ.:Krissy:.ღ

    Awww, that was so sweet! It was amazingly written. It had great flow. Amazing job!

    ~Krissy

  • 12 years ago

    by Poetic Mistress

    That is the sweetest poemI have everread

  • 12 years ago

    by [crimson] tearz_fall

    WOW this is wonderful. Your the sweetest guy ever, and i can tell this by how you write. Again your wonderful, keep up the good work, and your son is lucky to have a daddy like you!

  • 12 years ago

    by Alissa

    I want you to be the father of my baby :-( lol!! omg this is the best poem I have EVER read its so sweet...and so good. Congrats...and awesome job and oh shot I just fell in love with you! lol

  • 12 years ago

    by Mel

    That was heart warming.. truely beautiful.. well done here.. great job.. your a loving father to the max :D
    x mel x

  • 12 years ago

    by TORN

    great loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by TORN

    great loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by TORN

    great loved it

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsi

    This is a very touching poem!! I know you will be a great father, if you have followed what you want your son to follow. I hope everything goes well!! Great job!! 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Alex D

    its good!! check out some of my poems if you get a chanse