Rip it Apart

by The Poetic Child   Jul 13, 2005


I sit here inside,
no one noticing i cried,
i felt like i was lied,
to,
went through,
a big Trouble,
Got Pain X a Double,
I feel like I'm in a Bubble,
like I'm walking and i stumbled,
my heart is crumbled,
i cant be seen,
I'm trying not make a scene,
or be obscene,
just hate that this means,
people pass me,
and don't even see,
they walked right by me,
I just need a miracle,
thats why I'm here saying it lyrical,
i feel like water in the ocean,
no one noticing the motion
you make,
they just take,
your heart,
and then rip it apart......

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  • 18 years ago

    by FoundHim

    There really isnt much to say but great poem!i really enjoyed reading it...
    ~Sandra~

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Great discription as always.

    LISSA

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Thank you All..

  • 18 years ago

    by Spam

    thats funky! sad and sweet.

  • 18 years ago

    by kate

    Excellant ur a reslly great poet love it.