the rhyming seemed a little forced, but it worked pretty well...i like it, especially the last few lines -

"i feel like water in the ocean,
no one noticing the motion
you make,
they just take,
your heart,
and then rip it apart......"

xxx

wow!! that was extremly good!! i can so relate to that!! i always feel like casper when i'm around certain people. it really sucks!!

Excellent poem! 5

Excellant ur a reslly great poet love it.

thats funky! sad and sweet.

Thank you All..

Great discription as always.

LISSA

There really isnt much to say but great poem!i really enjoyed reading it...
~Sandra~