Oh! that was a good poem, well done to you, it flowed well and the nervous feelings, the anxiety was brilliant, It was put across well.. good work :D well done :D

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Impressive...i like this, the feelings are good, and real.

~Breeze

wow! i thought it was awesome! i like ur style...and u wrote about something different! hehe....plz read mine...luv neeki

Well...I loved it. It reminded me of Made on MTV. There was a boy on there last night trying to become a rapper. He sucked and then was alright at his last show. He was freaked out when people were dancing to his music and when they started yelling his name. Good stuff. Is this true though...is it you?? Do you live a secret life you haven’t shared with us yet? LoL Awesome poem…I love how you/or whoever was so afraid at first and then took over the stage later. Nicely done Coonay…. :)~~

Very good poem! 5 It is very different then most i have read! Very good topic!

Thats great how you described the nervousness! I would have never made it out on stage! Very creative poem and it flowed very well! You did an amazing job! ~Brooke~

Being on stage can be such a rush...so nervous at first, but after it's over you want to do it again... anyways, GREAT poem. I wasn't expecting that.... it's beautifully expressed. Very good description and the way you wrote it, it flows nicely.

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nice! i really liked the ending! way to drag me in! keep it up!

nice idea, nice job, i loved it, i haven't actually gone through that seeing as i haven't performed on stage, but great job! 5/5

Awesome! I don't exactly want to be a rock star, but great poem.
Peace, love and empathy

This was much better than I expected...
Very original, and the flow works out great.

I can't help thinking that there is a deeper meaning that I fail to see in this piece...Could you enlighten me on it?=)

The whole story within was interesting...The way this poem takes on step at a time, both for the reader and the writer, was just great...

""I sing you out of my heart,
I get you out of my mind.
Just like I fell in love with your voice,
I'm gonna MAKE you hear mine.""
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That I didn't like to well...

but the last stanza left a great impression, nevertheless..

keep it up

i really this one. I've never seen anyone else write about this, so it's good to see somebody do it. It has a nice flow to it too.
Well done!
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sorry, that last comment should say "I really LIKE this one."
*slaps head*

hey good poem! well done, good to read something a bit different =)
luv courtie

*applause for you* i would def. say this is awesome

That is brilliant, i love he way you say what you say and it is an unusual thing to write about yay!!!! its brilliant

Great job! i really enjoyed reading this one! And very unique topic also.. i think we all wish we were rockstar's but maybe not that kind hehe. 5/5

Wow! That was a brilliant poem. You've got stage fright down perfectly. Do you really sing? I sing and play the guitar a little but for huge crowds like you've described here. Anyway, I really love your poem. Keep up the good work. Take care.

I meant to put "but NOT for huge crowds" Sorry for any confusion.

I love your style and you great ability to turn something like that whitch not many people can relate to into something that makes the reader feel as if they were there. great job. 5/5
Lulu