Awesome poem hun!!!!!Keep up the good work!!!!!*Huggkes*<3 Elizabeth

Nice. Loved the first part which was strong but the last didn't end as strongly. Still it was very cool and different from what I've read by others. Awesome write.
~Faith of the Fallen

i love how you wrote it it was like in the begining you were strong and all of the factors of the poem slowly made you die down { am i making sense ?} it was AwsomE
~HazE

great poem, really strong. i can totaly relate to it. great work hun
lubsya courtie

Are you sick of us, cause i'm not sick of you, i'm just sick of life, it play with us everytime, just take up it's challenge and defeat it. Don't get a clue what i'm saying, never mine, i always does that.

Hey i like this poem loads

keep ritin

xXx

You probably wrote this when you were upset or something. seems like something i would say when i ahve rough times and theres no one there to listen to what you have to say ... but its alright when they need you right?? i really felt what you had to say ..

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