Comments : That (was the) Day

  • 18 years ago

    by Elynnka

    Oh my God, that is so sad! Is it really true? Other than the sad subject, the poem was pretty good, gave it a 5. Keep writing you'll get better and better ;)
    Thx for ur comment! Keep it up*hugs*

    ~*~~**m.c.flem**~~*~

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    I can't realy say much about this...it is so sad, the last lines brought tears to my eyes. It is written well, the evets unfold well. But some parts of it might allow your reader to lose intrest. good poem though

    ~Breeze

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Wow amazing poem! So very sad was this a true? You wrote this with great feeling and it was very touching. Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    omg thats so sad...is it true? 5/5 great job

  • 18 years ago

    by Solace

    Very nicely written. 5/5 none to less. Keep writing and take care (always))xx:

    *> : PainOfOne

  • 18 years ago

    by John (Mr. Whuppy)

    Wow so real
    great job well written
    i gave it 5
    jayvee73uk