Oh Loving World(Oh Dying World)

by Zer0riginZ   Jul 15, 2005


Damage taken, damage done,
Demons dancing oh so fun.

Red Horizon,
Screaming breeze,
Oh dying world,
we fall with ease!

Crimson sun,
scarlet stars.
the only one,
left with scars...
Is me...

I watch the sun,
I watch it rise.
Upon,
this world, this world of lies.

I wonder what tomorrow brings,
the rain of blood,
the blood of kings...
tides will rise,
and land will flood...

The end is near,
the end of fear.
True love will come,
not just for some.
It comes for everyone,
to save our world, and clean the sun.

love given, love is strong
the world has waited oh so long!

Gold horizon,
your beauty I saw!
Oh loving world!
We live in awe

Hearts have opened,
hearts are free,
Oh loving world,
how you have a heart for me!

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  • 17 years ago

    by Avellana

    ''Scarlet Stars''

    Those words just fit, not even sure why but they do. What i like about this poem is that it's not a set 4lines rhyming verse thingamagiggy. :)

    I like that it's free. xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    This one was really good Andrew. I like your wording. :) You always bring such excitement into your poetry, even when its not meant to be there. I love that.

    -Mwah, Jennifer.

  • 18 years ago

    by backporchpoet

    Chilling imagery, 5/5! write on!

  • 18 years ago

    by SuperJenius

    i loved it u write so well it waz transcendent times 100
    WICKED AWESOME
    ~HazE

  • 18 years ago

    by Mandy Lou

    This is great! 5/5 for you! Nice transition as well..Bad world to good I mean!

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