That was rather good. Not very strong but it was good.

Man that was good I feel like that every-time my ex runs across my mind but I had to let him go even if I loved him.

Your poems r really good

5/5 sweetheart,
You have talent
-Love Ashley

Good Job. You're great with words. Keep it up.

I loved this poem. it is great. i can really relate. 5/5

As a song, i think this would have a gr8 slow beat..with romantic back ground and a deep voice...would make Me cry lol..

as a poem ( lyrics) this is definitely a meaningful one. ..i have seen threw ur poems that u believe in memories that do last..and has a gd meaning.. well i agree...

from another side..true what i have sensed in ur heart here...its so hard to be around someone who u consider everything u have.. as someone just like the others in ur life... and YEs

no one can feel how u really do inside..and if they did..believe me u would have never heard

" take it easy" ;) !

so anyway i loved this SOng :)
5/5