Shining star

by aaron c s   Jul 17, 2005


To my once shining star:
I lay on my bed tonight
Looking at that plastic star you gave me
It shined so bright before
But now I barely see it.
The star reminds me of you
You shined so bright
All of your friends were envious
Because they wanted what we had
But now I look at our friends
And I am envious
They are not hurting
And their star is not burned out

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  • 17 years ago

    by kayla

    WOW thats SO sweet! well i guess your going to be famous! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ♥broken fairytales♥

    This poem is so cute, short and simple yet amazing!! lol you sound really sweet :D
    take care xxxx
    p.s thanks for my commets i appriciate it xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Justin

    Wow... another great poem, i really liked this one alot also and please if you get the chance check out my new poem, "horrid dream", again great job, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShhhhItsASecret©

    Awww!! This poem makes me sad, but it's still AWESOME!!!
    Love always,
    BJ

  • 18 years ago

    by kiesha

    That was really good. I know this sounds weird, and I'm not making it up, but I have a glow-in-the-dark star that reminded me of this guy, and since something happened (I won't go into it) it seems to be getting duller and duller all the time. Crazy. Anyway, keep it up and thanks for commenting on mine. It means a lot.

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