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BRILLIANT POEM!...i agree, that sometimes the real us cant be found, it seems to hide behide a barrier - looking on .. we seem afraid to be who we really are...WHY?... It took me 40 years to take the courage to be who I AM(reminds me of a poem on this site called ...""I am who i am". it takes courage , i know..to be yourself...instead of what people want us to be.But when u do,your being true to urself, and will be happier,as i have found! We ALL need courage! Again, well written and 5/5!

Pretty freaking cool. I personally didn't think you needed teh last two lines of the last stanza. I liked the first two lines of it, but the last two kind of spelled out what you were getting at. I believe it was already noticeable in the poem and you didn't have to come outright and state it.

damn that is cool
i hope you dont mind if i print it off and show sum of my friends??? cause theyd love to read it

WHOA! I'm guessing this poem was about multiple personalitys? I loved it...each and every line flowed great and you did a fantastic job with it! Keep it up!
Kind Regards,
~CHelsey~

hey hun you have real talent!
loved the poem 5/5 keep it up!!
great poem
maybe you can check some of my poems out..

much love,
Jamie