Comments : HE Had Other Plans

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    I LOVED IT!YOU ARE A GOOD WRITER

  • 18 years ago

    by hunnibunnz

    awww... its so touchin... but still sad... its like..the perfect mixx of emotions to make a really good poem...

    thanx fer commentin on mineXD

    ~l3.R.0.l<.£.l\l.~

  • 18 years ago

    by kat

    OMG got me in tears

  • 18 years ago

    by stephyG

    omg great poem.. ur so talented pls check out my newest poem "help me" and let me know wat u think mwwaz stephy :):)

  • 18 years ago

    by Christine

    Excellent poem, you can really feel the words come to life.
    If you got time, please check out some of mine. ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by LindaPham

    wow that's sad... great poem! it's very well written! good job and keep up the great work! 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Britney

    Awwl thats so sad.. I would just die if my baby died so young. But you had a great ending.. becuase what other way can they think of it! 5/5! great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    awww thats soo sad!!!.....though i really luved the ending....u worte it very well!....Keep up da amazin work! NEVA STOP WRITIN.... lolz! excellent job!!! 5/5

    well ne wayz g2g ttylz byez!xoxo
    ~Chica~

  • 18 years ago

    by dragonfly

    That is so sad, i am actually crying...it isn't true is it?

  • 18 years ago

    by InMyWorld

    well written, i liked it. this sad story comes to a lot of people.

  • 18 years ago

    by jencam

    oh my gosh, that was so sad, what a wonderful wonderful poem. Great job!

  • 18 years ago

    by the middle

    Great poem... so sad and touching...
    take care, xoxoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    So sweet. I would cry, really, but I'm at school so I'm trying my hardest not to....

    Great write.

  • 18 years ago

    by Blutonium Boy

    Great poem... Touching... Great consistancy throughout and great ending... *goosebumps.* Keep up the great work and keep writing!

  • Beautiful poem, really sweet. i liked it alot.
    Thanks for your comment on my poem 'Charmbracelet' i really appreciate it !

    xxx cici xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by lana

    Oh this is sad
    but a great poem!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Unknown Soul

    This is a very sad, cute, nice excellent, amazing poem...great job...5/5