wow, amazing poem I really liked it. it was very descriptive and...basically amazing lol. good job once again:)

I hope your feeling better
I like your writing style this poem is really really sad and dark ......but i like it!
5/5

Wow excellent poem! everything went together so smoothly it was like it was effortless for you! Anyways great job 5/5!

how sad! great twist on the topic of suiside. not many can write about it in a way that is almost indirect! nicely done.

~Breeze

Excellent! I love the anxiety in it! I was in a hurry to get to the bottom of it to see how it would end. It kept my interest and was very emotional.

The only thing I'll say to you is...an untitled poem is a LAZY poem. :) Something to think about.

EXCELLENT TITLE!! That fits perfectly! ;)

i hope u fell better cuz that was an awesome poem greta skills u have keep up the excellent work

my ex best frend tried to drown me...it felt good i wish she did drown me..umm yer i may sound like a hypocrit but u deserve to live...5/5

take it easy hunni

-angel-