Why can't we study your poetry at school? it's so much better that Seamus Heaney's and Walt Whitman's an Gillian Clarke's *hides from famous poets*. hmph. i think we should. dont kick me for commenting twice. i am forgetful and have alot to say, bad combination. :D
Wow... some people most definatly don't know how to judge a good poem, its only a 4.4 rating!? wow.. it should be a 5.0! its such a great poem, such big words but not too bad that you can't understand it, i'm amazed, i can't believe that you were capable of writing such a great poem, great job, 5/5
WOW!!! well done for winning the contest lucy!!!! this is an absolutely brilliant poem, and you deserve the recognition! i absolutely stand by what i said when i said we should study your stuff at school, or sixthform as it will be in 2 weeks...keep writing, for as long as i live you will always have somebody who loves your poetry!!!