Comments : My everyday story

  • 12 years ago

    by Steph

    wow!!! loved that poem....i was crying when i got to the end!!!

  • 12 years ago

    by ZOMGEMO

    WOW that's deep... AMAZING!!!

    check mine out some time...

    *..KimiC..* XxXo0oXxX

  • 12 years ago

    by Jesslyn

    this is good and sad too. im sorry thats your story, i hope things change for you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Jordan

    That was extremly well written. You can almost feel like you're there watching everything happen. I know what its like to cut and just want everything to go away, so I really relate to this story.

    Much Love,
    Jordan-Paige

  • 12 years ago

    by myxlittlexcut

    wow what an amazing poem
    it was so sad so emotional and so well written that i cant find the right words to explain how i feel
    stay strong and good job

  • 12 years ago

    by x x bRittAny

    i just want to congradulate you for having the power to write somthing with so much meaning to your life!! must have been hard but you must be so strong to b able to! i hope you dont take you life from this occuring you have no need to feel alone and you dont deserve this pain thats being conflicted on yourself!! do somthing dont let this happen! ill always be here to help you! i really will
    love britt x x x please think about what i have sed read deep into it!!
    YOUR BEAUTIFUL!

  • 12 years ago

    by RaNdOmGaL

    omg i don't know what to say, i sort of understand, my life is sort of like that but not as bad!!!
    i love it, it's perfect, keep up the good work!!!
    luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by x bRoKeN xx dReAmS x

    omg that is such an awesome poem!!!You're a great writer!! The way you expressed yourself is just so amazing and also very sad.I go through the yelling and screaming but not the hitting I am very truley sorry that it has to be you when it shouldnt hasve to be anybody,Stay strong and take care!
    Luv ya,
    <3Linzee<3

  • 12 years ago

    by hiddenimage

    i really liked u're poem...

  • 12 years ago

    by Alissa

    wow sorry you go through this it sounds like hell...but this poem was amazing it all went together and ryhmed it was just great....NICE job!

  • 12 years ago

    by Leighann

    this poem is very well written, if flows well and gives great description, it was very sad and i feel for you.

  • 12 years ago

    by Chelsi

    Great job!! I hope your alright! Hang in there!! 5/5 Keep writing!!

  • 12 years ago

    by LindaPham

    wow great poem! you are such an excellent writer it's so very sad... stay strong and take care
    --BrokenSmile

  • 12 years ago

    by keri

    so sad so true so amazing please read my poetry and vote/comment thanx

  • 12 years ago

    by Razorblade

    That was really good! -claps- Bravo.

    Here,
    -Razor-

  • 12 years ago

    by charity

    I go through this alot myself my dad never hits me but he does hurt me emotionally and sometimes I feel scared of him and threatened but I do know that loves me and he would probably do anything for me he just has a bad temper and doesn't know how to control it sometimes if you ever need anyone to talk to my e-mail address is charityeggink@hotmail.com

  • 12 years ago

    by e LIZ a beth

    woah...trhat was an amazing poem...omg never stop writting....

  • 12 years ago

    by Kel

    that is really good and really touching...5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Suri dawn

    Wow that was so amazing,lots of emotion!Great poem,loved it!Keep it up!Lots of love and hugs,Becklin

  • 12 years ago

    by Joey P

    GOD BLESS

    By the Way my gurl go through the samething.