Fate as a Demon Would Have it

by Kimmi   Jul 20, 2005


Fate as a Demon Would Have It

The joy of sin
The angel's sorrow
An anger within
And the end of tomorrow.

In the demon's eyes of hatred
So often lies the shiney gleam
From his indescribable pleasure
Of a young child's cries for more ice cream.

The silence is so loud
From the human souls now still.
They lay ignorant and spoiled
Victims of his constant thrill.

As all of us are these days
(figureatiivly speaking)
Day by day society sinks
Greatness constantly leaking.

Now is the demon above sin? Maybe.
Perhaps he's just the forgetting of truth.
Call him what you like,
While he steals common sence from our youth.

(Along with many of his other disguises)
T.V., foul music, The list goes on.
Our lives now revolve around material pleasures
While values once so treasured are gone.

This demon's not the only one
Millions are born of our lust, want, and hating
They'd die if only we found our values
(Don't you see? They are of our creating)

Though, I'll say I cannot blame,
For many demons I too have created
With all my spite and scornful ways
My soul also has been berated.

Remember, these things don't have a set lifetime.
They're born with every tainted thought.
But die whenever we seek to learn things;
When good morals we are taught.

You can be sure this little monster,
(If given the chance) will take his toll.
So my friend, please heed my warning
"Keep a close watch on your soul."

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Wrote this one to explain how society is losing sight of what's important, like honor and the old values we used to have, and how a lot of us are starting to build our lives around material things.If it offends you, don't read it anymore, but please spare me from any ignorant comments you have. All constructive criticism is welcome.

(to those of you who ARE ignorant, comments such as, 'this sux' and other things closely related, are NOT constructive criticism, and will be deleted.)

thank you. :D

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  • 18 years ago

    by Kimmi

    Kenshini, thanx for the comment. Most of the people who read this are too blind to see what I mean. Half the time, they get mad at me. Send me angry letters. It think they're mad because they don't want to see the truth. Our society really is crashing, and we are not as great as we once were. And, many people disagree, but then, 99% of them are the ones I spoke of in my poem. The ones who's lives revolve around material things.

    Anyhow, I suppose I'll get off my soap box and write.

    Thanks for the comment. XD
    Kimmi~*

  • 18 years ago

    by Kenshin Himura

    You're right. Society sucks. It's sad that like.. girls are getting pregnant at 13, and people are smoking up... Music sucks now. Everything... I hope more people read this...

  • 18 years ago

    by Ana Vidovic

    Wow this is an awesome poem!! I really enjoyed reading it, you are very talented! If you want could you please R/C some of mine too:) (the one called Conscience might appeal to you):D

    Luv,
    Ana*

  • 18 years ago

    by India Vogel

    i liked this poem a lot. u did a great job at writing it. please read some of my poems and vote/comment it would mean a lot to me. u did an aweome job! i hope to read some more of ur poems.
    love me always,
    india

  • 18 years ago

    by MiMi

    Hey this is a great poem i love it i dont know why one wouldnt like it unless they aint in to there kind of poems i love it gurl dont let these hatas bring u down. ok