thats cool i like that poem!!
Amanda

yeh i agree, nice poem, good idea. nice repotition, thnx 4 commening on mine :)

love mark xxx

Lucy this is such a cool poem! I love the distinctive rhythm and the way it's so different from your other poems. It reminds me loads of Limbo! Love it love it love it! :D

hehehe! great poem again! it reminds me of limbo!!! hehehe!! love it! ^_^

ABSOLUTELY INCREDIBLE!!! I LOVE IT :-D

WOW darling!!! How come all of your poems are absolutly fantabulous? Oh ignore me Im just being all evil and completly jealous. But I love the rhythm. GREAT!!|!!
~spana~
xxxxx

I love this poem, its diffrent from a lot of poems i have read 9and i've read a lot!!!, lol)

Err i've already commented on this once apparently. But hey, I really really really really like this one too. Because it just makes you want to get up and dance around! LETS ALL DANCE!!!!