Comments : Without a Sound

  • 18 years ago

    by blackrose1011

    powerful! "what friends are for was never clearly stated" great line! I love this poem, it has amazing feeling to it, the content is wonderful!

    ~Breeze

  • 18 years ago

    by iwanttobalone

    ike she said.. powerful. this poem is excellent.

    i saw your pic you kjow. som epsucho gonna com e find you and rape you. dun dun.

  • 18 years ago

    by undying blusher

    wow...that was powerful...great phrasing in there...

    xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    Very well done. A very excellent piece. This was very well done. Love the lines 'Over the years/best friends have become over rated/what friend are for/was never clearly stated.' And excellent job.
    ~Faith of the Fallen

  • 18 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Very intense and also depressing! Pain can do so much to a persons mind. It’s too bad some people turn to the knife to cope! Very sad well-written poem! Take Care! Brooke~

  • 18 years ago

    by ruth

    Very honest. I hope you really don't do this to yourself.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jannie

    wow nice write

  • but you know what you dont have to do things lik that there are other options

  • 18 years ago

    by CHOKE

    I tOtAlLy LoVeD tHiS pOeM bAbEs! 5/5!
    *hUgGlEs~N~hUgGkEs*
    (*)-_-(*)eLiZaBeTh(*)-_-(*)

  • 16 years ago

    by reJoyce

    Wow great read. i can never focus on a poem and read it all the way through without going back a few times but this one flowed all the way through. i think u might want to add an S on the end of friend in the line, "what friend are for was never clearly stated." great line btw. keep in touch ur on my favs

  • 16 years ago

    by Melly

    Very sad and emotionally, but great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lesbian Natalie

    I have felt like that before 5/5