powerful! "what friends are for was never clearly stated" great line! I love this poem, it has amazing feeling to it, the content is wonderful! |
ike she said.. powerful. this poem is excellent. |
wow...that was powerful...great phrasing in there... |
Very well done. A very excellent piece. This was very well done. Love the lines 'Over the years/best friends have become over rated/what friend are for/was never clearly stated.' And excellent job. |
by Brookeღ
Very intense and also depressing! Pain can do so much to a persons mind. It’s too bad some people turn to the knife to cope! Very sad well-written poem! Take Care! Brooke~ |
by ruth
Very honest. I hope you really don't do this to yourself. |
by Jannie
wow nice write |
but you know what you dont have to do things lik that there are other options |
by CHOKE
I tOtAlLy LoVeD tHiS pOeM bAbEs! 5/5! |
by reJoyce
Wow great read. i can never focus on a poem and read it all the way through without going back a few times but this one flowed all the way through. i think u might want to add an S on the end of friend in the line, "what friend are for was never clearly stated." great line btw. keep in touch ur on my favs |
by Melly
Very sad and emotionally, but great job. |
I have felt like that before 5/5 |