Lovely sentiment, truely...kinda cliche in the flow and structure...but it's something i think of often when walking...about the peace of nature...the stillness of water and like you say, how much we could learn from observing.

I know my poems are all kinda cliche in that sense, but I am trying, honest. Thanks for the comment anyhow..

~Spanski~

aaah! beautyful. i love it my lil hannah spana cleavage face. pure serenity

pretty poem! very calm and beautiful ;)

This is an awesome poem. I love it. We need to all learn from it. Great job. I admire you.