Undreamed of

by Rachel Moore   Jul 21, 2005


She bows down low,with desperate grace
they both join hands and start to pace
with each step closer into space
they clash,white tux,against black lace

their eyes can't meet for fear of love
his hands tighten on her velvet gloves
in awkward adorance,still they dance
and take for granted,the beauty of teen romance

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bruno Seiler

    I love this one. It's unique and I can relate to it =)

  • 18 years ago

    by Rena

    This is my favorite of everything you've written. beautiful and don't let anyone tell you different!

  • 18 years ago

    by Cory Mastrandrea

    pretty damn good. Best serious teen love poem I have read on this site. Good rhyme, flow, description and overall story line

  • 18 years ago

    by Romy Rose

    Girl, I like this p0em.. ;)
    y0ur feelings are deep, as I l0ok at y0ur 0ther writing =D
    thanks f0r the c0mment 0n Lost Love,,. personally, I think it's bull., cus it isn't true anym0re.. t0 me ;).,
    *hugs* PunkChick

  • 18 years ago

    by SCARECROW

    Desperate grace...
    I love this poem, it is spectacularly well written.
    Congratulations.

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