Comments : Dont leave me

  • 12 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Amanda, You two will work it out, even best friends can have their differences!!!! You and Jade have a good time and enjoy yourselfs.... hugs, love, Ann

  • 12 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    I know that you and Jade are best frineds, so nothing can break you apart, you'll get through this....Reading this poem broke my heart, cause I know how much you two love eachother.....But it'lll be ok I know!!!! Hope you have a great time together, the time you two have left!!!!

    *Love Sabrina*

  • 12 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    Hey babe....Would you like to be a member of a poetry club??? You should join the Mystic Mind club....Think about it =0) Hope that you are feeling better....

    Hugs n' love...

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    You two are true friends and I am sure things will work out for you! I wish you the best. Every friendship has a bump in the road one time or another. You will find sometimes these bumps will make the friendship even stronger. At least it did with my best friend. Very heartfelt poem. I was able to relate to it! Sorry I have fallen behind on my reading it doesn't help with the numbers not showing up when you have posted a new poem! Good luck to the two of you! ~Brooke~

  • 12 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    your poem was extremely beautiful. and i strongly agree with the fact that friendship is forever, don't let little things break it... just go and sort it out

  • 12 years ago

    by Sparklylipgloss

    My bff and i can realte to this...i feel ya sista.

  • 12 years ago

    by RachelAnne

    thats really good!

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    This is such a heartfelt write so sad and blue. I hope things did work out for you.

    Warm regards,

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by Britney

    Wow very nice poem. You could tell that all your emotion was in that! The ending truly was something though But this poem was awesome! 5/5! your also very talented and I plan to read more of your poetry when I have the time but until then keep it up! Much luv xox Britney xox

  • 12 years ago

    by cac123

    This was so beautiful and heartfelt i reaally enjoyed this and i can relate it to all of my fights with friends.. it really is amazing you are a really good writer.
    5/5
    always,
    cate

    p.s i really really appreciate your comments you left me thank you so much it means a lot to me.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lenny

    Thats gorgeous, i like the tense its set it and the message