Your Love (Eintou)

by Steven Beesley   Jul 22, 2005


Intro: This is my first attempt at writing an Eintou style poem. Please let me have your comments on any problems you find.

Your love
Gift from above
Like sweet spring rain and dew
Giving enlightenment to me
You have painted my soul
Filled with such grace
You bring

Eintou [Ngusa Saba]:
African American style poetry. West African term for "Pearl" (Pearls of wisdom). Life is a cycle that returns to where it has originated.
Arrangement: 2-4-6-8-6-4-2 syllable count.

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  • 18 years ago

    by shobhana kumar

    You are one of those very few people who can bring out complete meaning in such few words, Steve.

    great work (as usual!!!)
    shobhana

  • 18 years ago

    by kida

    Its good but i cant really understand it. plz read and comment on sum of mine

  • 18 years ago

    by Rose

    I think it's very cool how you show interest in different styles...not just stringing words together...shows style and dedication...I like it. Keep it up.
    ..~*~.. blessed be

  • 18 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Another wonderfully done form arrangement, kudos!!!