it's a great poem even if it is filled with sadness that a lot of kids/teens go through these days. and i'm sorry but things will get better. you have you're whole future ahead of you.

hey thnks so much for you comment it means a lot .. i am sorry to hear what happend to you i hope your ok.. umm you poem was amazing and you get 5/5 i do hope everythign gets better

OMG... Im sorry for wut ur going through... If u need to talk im here for u... Check my poems... Oh by the way.... GREAT poem... i love how u discribe ur life with the poem... I love it... u should keep writting cuss u have a gift that has become ur talent... Great job.. Take care.. Love: ferny!!!!<3333

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I want to say so many words right now Kalah, but i fear i would be penalized or something....

I'm sorry that your "father" is such a bastard. If i could change that i swear to God i would...damn him.

Kalah i'm so sorry...know that i am always around to talk to...take care sweets.

I love you so much. Remember that i'll always care about you as if you were my own sister.

Love Always and Forever, //ari\\

Ohh my God....I'm speechless, I can't believe that this happened to you.....God I hope he rots in hell....Very emotional and meaningful poem, I wish it wasn't a true story!!! I'm always here for you if you need to talk!!!

You are not alone..

*Love sabrina*

he told you that you deserve it but you certainly DON'T! don't believe a word your father says if he's going to say such things like that, it will only bring you down. i'm so sorry to hear about the wood he threw at you, can't even imagine how much that would hurt

So as i write this entry,
I promise i won't be scared,
I'll hide the pain once more,
Because i know that no one cares.

it's ok to be scared, it's a reaction everyone gets, it's one thing being brave and bold but it's another when you ignore your insticts to get away from something, there are times you should listen to your fears.

also the line that you should hide your pain because no one cares = NOT TRUE i love you hun and care so much about you! put you pain through these poem and i'll try to be there for you the best i can. you're not alone me and ari are here for you, always! you wrote it very well though

~PLP~ lil slam~

This isnt a stupid poem at all. It was one of your best i think. You need to get yourself away from your father. I know you want to help but you're only hurting yourself by staying there.
-A

Hello Sweets, it's me again. Thanks so much for your comment! HURRY BACK SOOOOON!!!! I'll miss you. :'( Make a safe trip, Kal. Umm...i guess i'll catch you sometime later. I luffs you...

Peaces and Love Always, Love //Ari\\

WoW!! nice poem it seems like i have a rele long way to reach this perfect level of writing.

plz read some of my poems and give me some comment to be better coz i need some advices.

Hey Kalah!! :D

I just got your comments this morning...don't worry about not doing it sooner, i'm just happy to hear rom you. :) I hope you had a great trip! It sounds fun to be able to travel and all. :D

So how are you?

Love you so much, Kalah...

Peaces. //Ari\\