Somebody Please Listen....

by healing wounds   Jul 23, 2005


Somebody please listen…

I have some thing I want to say
Some thing that was locked away
Deep inside of my wicked mind

Something that’s consumed me and has taken control
That something is what makes me act a fool

It has yelled and screamed
Until I’m blue in the face

When I brought it in I thought I could win this race
But instead I got kicked in the face

Now I’m down on the ground after every meal
Getting rid of all my hate and creating a new fate

That’s the way it goes day after day
And if I disobey
Then I have a price to pay

Shall I not get rid of the hate?
I will have to take my razor from the shelf
And dig it all out instead

So somebody please listen…

I have something I want to say
Don’t get lost in this kind of decay…

**I know its not that good, but its straight from the heart...so please rate and comment....greatly appreciated**

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  • 18 years ago

    by EJ

    I thought it was good also!! emotion is what makes a poem!! if you have enough emotion and able to show it and not scared to all of your poems will be great!! believe in yourself your a good writter!! bye bye EJ