Why do you hate me??

by lisa   Jul 24, 2005


People don't know the real me
they don't know that I'm fake
they don't know that i act happy
so when people tell me they hate me
outside i act like i don't care
but deep down i do
people don't see what they make me do
they don't see the razor
they don't see the little girl inside crying
all i wanna know is why?
why do you hate me?
they don't see me hurting
they could care less
but why
why do you hate me?

**this is to everyone who hates me..please vote/comment the favor will be returned

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  • 16 years ago

    by Devon

    I like your ideas! I dont hate you! love your work! it sort of relate to some part of my life too.

  • 16 years ago

    by David

    Great poem 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kys Dirty Little Secret

    That is so true I hate it when people don't see that they are hurting you physically or mentally it doesn't matter it still hurts. I wish I could write like you. your a very good poet keep up the good work

  • 18 years ago

    by queRyfilleD...

    I think Vino's right about the rhyme scheme, preferably at the end line. Your poem is an honest expression of the reality of life..it's blunt and it's good. Aim high!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    I get the message, but it will be more effective with a rhyme sceme(i think i spelled that wrong but you get the point).
    -Vino

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