Wow I absolutely love this poem! The flow was flawless! Your choice of words was exellent! From the very first stanza I was hooked! Take Care! Brooke~

aww.. this is so sweet.. i loved the ending and ur rhyme was gr8.. the flow seemed o be off at some stanzas, but the rest is gud.. i lovd it..
keep up the faith

WOW, u're such a a good writter!
i loved your poem
check out my stuff if u want and tell me what you think

Perfectly written! I really like your style in writing poetry! Excellent job!

Your comment on my 'no' poem was well observed and hit the mark.
I have a conflict within due to the fact Ilive in a place and have found myself in a space where people have no depth/substance or whatever - few do. At times it feeld good to sort of hibernate and take stock of my thoughts.

Your poem, though appearing dark, steps out into the light and celebrates it. That's good because the general tone/subject seems to be the recoil from a relationship where you've been hurt. Your writing is impressive and thoughtful.

Hey, perfect, i read ya profile and i have read some of ya poems, it is good to know who someone is.

Another incredible poem, your so tallented and this poem is such a tribute to that. The short lines really convey the message quite well. the second stanza is my favorite =) awesome job.

This was really good~! I liked the concept! I did not really like the part Sunshine-Your light?
Is it really true?
Warm, visable...
But does it complete you?

I don't know it just did not seem to flow at all for me!