The untold lies.......

by unstated affinity   Jul 26, 2005


I would never forgive myself..
even i am dropped in hell
never knowing how u feel.....
with a deep blue ill.........

on that short christmas eve.....
when you suddenly leave
a pair of teary eyes.......
as i know the untold lies.....

thus, your gentle smile.....
has turned into incomprehensible file.....
and every single of your touch
has become a deep ingrained cut....

what a fool i am......
full of critics and damn.....
your life is full of uncertainty
but i keep nagging a pity

again and again...
i expect you to understand..
with a sound of offense
without knowing where you stand.....

even so, you always deny.....
to say that important line
with a soft white lie...
or a saying i'm fine........

now, bombard me with your protests..
but please do not give me such a test..
please don't you ever leave me.....
cause you mean the world to me...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    I wanted to read the comments on this poem and I just realized what a mistake I had done. three same comments and then another two.
    sorry for that.

  • 18 years ago

    by HansRik

    This is a very well written poem. Ths diction is just fantastic. I must tell you that you are very talented indeed. The punctuation is off at times, but the effect it created was excellent. Furthermore, I like the imagery you use. The rhymes are a bit forced at times, but still, this is a good poem. Well done.

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovemylove

    Really deep I like it.

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    great poem yuniardi.
    thank you so much for commenting
    on my poems.
    I really appreciate that.
    wish you the best,
    marjan

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    great poem yuniardi.
    thank you so much for commenting
    on my poems.
    I really appreciate that.
    wish you the best,
    marjan

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