The Pierce of Lying

by WakeboardxChick   Jul 26, 2005


Lying can pierce you like a flying metal dart
Like a stabbing saber straight through you heart

Eternal pain
Leaving scars
Stuck in your head
As if trapped behind bars

Who knew such a lie
could cause so much pain
Crying, depression,
Hiding, and shame

Little by little it will tear you apart
worse than a saber worse than a dart

What could hurt worse than the blade of a knife
A long, terrible, miserable life

It takes more than a sorry to make the pain go away
So if you cant say the truth
you have nothing to say

~A JaNeAn OrIgInAl~

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  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    \\//\\// (()) \\//\\//!!! that was amazing! loved the wording keep it up girlie!

  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Hey this poem is awesome!!! It was very emotinal and i almost cried!!! Seriosly!! continue writing poems like this!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by BleedingAngel

    So true...what a brilliant poem, it really grabbed me!!! Don't know what else to say, it's EXCELLENT!!! I kinda relate to it, the cutting thing!!!!

    *Much Love Sabrina*

  • 18 years ago

    by ~â‚£ading |nspiration~

    It's truth that lying certainly caused damage and you wrote it out so well, i hope people would stop lying when they see you poem.

    And girl, It rhymes perfectly well, and i love poems that rhyme, not that i don't love the one that doesn't just that it's nicer to read it out. I don't rhymes my poems everytime too.

    Sorry for the long comment, best of luck girl. And hope the people around you will be true to you.

    xoxoxoxoxoxo~apoemfriend~

  • 18 years ago

    by David Wallace

    Do your thing mama that was wonderful.Read my poem called "Truth" you may find it similar to this one.ITS HOT!!!!!!!!!