I gave you a 5/5 because I understand how the poem really get into people head. Also because you telling the truth because a long terrible and miserable life is worth more than a sorry. Just God would know when the pain will go away. So continue to do good work

5/5 because it is true and straight from the heart i love it! good job keep it up! love it!

cool poem!

amazing poem keep up the good work...and thanxs for the comment

that was awesome. you're really talented. my favorite part was the last 2 lines of it. keep up the good work! i'll definitely keep reading your poems

WOW this is really good, i like it...
Charli xxx ~*~

Good job

Do your thing mama that was wonderful.Read my poem called "Truth" you may find it similar to this one.ITS HOT!!!!!!!!!

It's truth that lying certainly caused damage and you wrote it out so well, i hope people would stop lying when they see you poem.

And girl, It rhymes perfectly well, and i love poems that rhyme, not that i don't love the one that doesn't just that it's nicer to read it out. I don't rhymes my poems everytime too.

Sorry for the long comment, best of luck girl. And hope the people around you will be true to you.

xoxoxoxoxoxo~apoemfriend~

So true...what a brilliant poem, it really grabbed me!!! Don't know what else to say, it's EXCELLENT!!! I kinda relate to it, the cutting thing!!!!

*Much Love Sabrina*

Hey this poem is awesome!!! It was very emotinal and i almost cried!!! Seriosly!! continue writing poems like this!!!!

\\//\\// (()) \\//\\//!!! that was amazing! loved the wording keep it up girlie!