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by â€ JustAriâ€ Jul 28, 2005
Nature, environment /
Tears drowned by the sea
Trapped beneath eternally
Sifting waters die...
*If you are saddened or discouraged, hopefully you may find inner serenity...
Â© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005
Haiku: An unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines, usually has a seasonal reference or on nature.
Arrangement: 5-7-5 syllable count.
First time I've checked out your work. You have an amazing talent for words. Well done.
Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem â€œA Wishing Dreamerâ€... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job
by Steven Beesley
Lovely! I love reading and writing Haiku's. You can also try a Tanka which is a similar form as a Haiku.
loves it! it's nice seeing you write in these different styles, i'm learning new things :) wonderful job hun!
~PLP~ lil slam~
wow...thats really good...awsome job...kudos