Sifting Waters (Haiku)

by †JustAri†   Jul 28, 2005

Tears drowned by the sea
Trapped beneath eternally
Sifting waters die...

*If you are saddened or discouraged, hopefully you may find inner serenity...

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

Haiku: An unrhymed verse form of Japanese origin having three lines, usually has a seasonal reference or on nature.
Arrangement: 5-7-5 syllable count.


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  • 12 years ago

    by Mel

    First time I've checked out your work. You have an amazing talent for words. Well done.

  • 12 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Lovely! I love reading and writing Haiku's. You can also try a Tanka which is a similar form as a Haiku.

    Take care!


  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    loves it! it's nice seeing you write in these different styles, i'm learning new things :) wonderful job hun!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 12 years ago

    by -sadyellow-

    wow...thats really good...awsome job...kudos