Comments : Sifting Waters (Haiku)

  • 12 years ago

    by JL

    great job i lyked it! i lyke haikus but i cant rite them......oh well! 5/5 keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Great haiku girl. You did it right and it made a lot of sense to the reader.
    (Especially to me).

    Love yah Ari <3
    - Kal.

  • 12 years ago

    by -sadyellow-

    wow...thats really good...awsome job...kudos

  • 12 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    loves it! it's nice seeing you write in these different styles, i'm learning new things :) wonderful job hun!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 12 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Lovely! I love reading and writing Haiku's. You can also try a Tanka which is a similar form as a Haiku.

    Take care!

    Steve

  • 12 years ago

    by ├Truely_Spoken┤

    Hey, cool poem, enjoyed it. Listen, when u get the chance, could u rate & comment my new poem “A Wishing Dreamer”... I would appreciate it. Thanks.. and good job

  • 12 years ago

    by Mel

    First time I've checked out your work. You have an amazing talent for words. Well done.