True story of a broken heart...

by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X   Jul 28, 2005


Love happens so fast
one look is all it takes
but love can be destroyed,
every second another heart breaks

i didn't love you from the start
it didn't happen just that fast
my love for you slowly blossomed
while yours just didn;t last

as i grew to like you more,
you grew to love me less.
and as you became less attached
i became more obsessed

i love you so so much
and you don't love my back.
your the only one i want
without you i'm just black

i need you in my arms
telling you you need me so
i need another chance
so together we can grow

i love the way you smile
and the way you'd laugh out loud
the way you'd kiss me in school
just made me feel so proud

i love the way you'd come and find me
and the way you held my wasit
i miss the old you so much
i miss that love that you misplaced

i wish you'd see what you saw
and be the way you used to
i wish that you could love me
the way that i love you

please comment and vote, i miss him ..~'*'~..

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  • 15 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Awwww i really understand how u feel
    im going threw it atm =[
    it hurts nd i miss him as well

    gud poem though, i really liked it

    xxx

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Hey i loved this poem, it was really deep and sadly so true for so many of us out there
    You did a really great job with this piece, keep up the great work!

  • 17 years ago

    by justhere

    Wow this was great.......really nice job
    i loved how you described every girls dream come true taken away fromthem
    ---its really just described exactly how i feel....im glade you can put it in such beautiful words

  • 18 years ago

    by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X

    Thank you, i just write what i feel... you are now one of my favourites! and thanks for taking the time to read my stuff..

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    For such a young person you've certainly got a way with words, and know how to express your emotion. another wonderful poem. brilliently worded

    brad

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