Comments : True story of a broken heart...

  • 18 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    For such a young person you've certainly got a way with words, and know how to express your emotion. another wonderful poem. brilliently worded

    brad

  • 18 years ago

    by X~ BrOkEn BeYoNd RePaIr ~X

    Thank you, i just write what i feel... you are now one of my favourites! and thanks for taking the time to read my stuff..

  • 17 years ago

    by justhere

    Wow this was great.......really nice job
    i loved how you described every girls dream come true taken away fromthem
    ---its really just described exactly how i feel....im glade you can put it in such beautiful words

  • 17 years ago

    by Katie

    Hey i loved this poem, it was really deep and sadly so true for so many of us out there
    You did a really great job with this piece, keep up the great work!

  • 15 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Awwww i really understand how u feel
    im going threw it atm =[
    it hurts nd i miss him as well

    gud poem though, i really liked it

    xxx