Blue Eyes (Eintou)

by †JustAri†   Jul 29, 2005


Blue eyes
Make me guilty
Intense and deceitful
Discreet and passionate for soul
In this dumb first-grade game
I lose control
Of me...

© Copyright Ariana 2003-2005

Eintou:
African American style poetry.
Line 1 - 2 syllables
Line 2 - 4 syllables
Line 3 - 6 syllables
Line 4 - 8 syllables
Line 5 - 6 syllables
Line 6 - 4 syllables
Line 7 - 2 syllables

    report violation
0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Erica

    i tried to write one of these but its hard much respect to you for that

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacklyn

    graet poem hum. gez i can't spell today i keep having to push backspace. well my neck hurts so sorry for such comment!

    ~PLP~ lil slam~

  • 18 years ago

    by ElegantlyWasted

    Wow, this verse is deeper than me. I related the last 3 lines to easy love, typical love that can be found if you just try. I make no sense, nice write though hun.
    Luvvoo <333.

    /Kal.

Read All Comments (3)

More Poems By †JustAriâ€