Comments : What if?

  • 12 years ago

    by cαtαstrophe--x

    good poem.5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by avery

    This is really good. I think it's how a lot of people think about relationships.
    I know that's how I feel. Your writing technique is great. And rhyming skills are awesome too.

  • 12 years ago

    by NannO

    nice feeling the poem envokes.. u put out ur feelings of confusion in a gud way, and the rhyme was gud..
    wen he's the one, u'll just noe.. no need to wonder.. ;)
    keep goin.. and stop wonderin too much (lol)
    take care

  • 12 years ago

    by Andrea

    good poem. full of emotion and saddness. i liked it alot

  • 12 years ago

    by RaNdOmGaL

    great poem really heart felt!!!!! i love it!!!
    luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by crystal

    you expressed your emotion well in this one. great job.
    crystal