Comments : As Good As Dead

  • 18 years ago

    by none

    that was sooooo good! it made me cry 5\5 for sure! keep writing!
    Much Love
    Chelsea

  • 18 years ago

    by allie

    excellent!!!! i love it 5/5!!! dont do it tho theres alot of ppl on this site that care for u and will miss u if anything happens!!

    much love- allie

  • brilliant, i havent read your poems before but came across this one and it was amazing. im sorry that you feel the way you do. but your an awesum writer so keep it up =) take care x

  • 18 years ago

    by BloodScars

    awesome...5/5 nothing i would change about it...NEVER stop writing...your excelent..

  • 18 years ago

    by Prince Enigma

    wow strong lines, strong lines, flowed well. rhymes were almost perfect too.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hayley Marie

    wow. powerful poem!!! its really good.
    Please check out some of my poems!!
    Hayley-Ree xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by steph

    f u k dat was reali reali reali reali good i lov it !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    dear tina,
    i have to say great poem.. speacially the line-- you are the perfect imperfection-- it was very touchy...
    other then that i loved the way made the lines rhyme and each line just went right through to my soul.... wonderful poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Iyla

    --you are the perfect imperfection--

    that's beautiful, i made sure that i commented on this before i left, i wanted to tell you that all your poems are great and very emotional, and that i loved this poem, great job.
    -Kit

  • 18 years ago

    by ---AL---

    You poems are so sad :( ...but their damn good...The rhyming was great, and the use of words was amazing! (especially the perfect imperfection) It didn't to flow as well as your other poems but it still made for an awesome read!! keep writting, you seem to bless every pen you touch... And a thousand hugs for every thing that has happened to make you want to end it all... Bye! talk to you later!

    5/5 :-)

  • 18 years ago

    by Denise

    Again, GREAT wonderful poem. Even from the famous writers, you are my favorite.

  • 18 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    You’re the perfect imperfection”

    i love that line! brilliant poem hun xox