Comments : Still love you

  • 18 years ago

    by RaNdOmGaL

    awwww lovely poem it is sooo sweet and heart felt!!!!!!
    keep up the good work!!!
    luv RaNdOmGaL xxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Hopeless Romantic

    great poem! i really enjoyed reading it and soaked up the emotion flowing from your words!

    Mike

  • 18 years ago

    by †JustAri†

    I feel the same charm all around when i read your poems, Preciosa. Kinda makes me comfortable. But this one makes me kind of sad, too. :( Lost love, broken heart...but anyways...the flow is a little choppy, like in the first stanza. But you don't have to change it, it's fine the way it is. :)

    Remember to keep confidence too. ;)

    Peaces. //Ari\\

  • 18 years ago

    by Katrina Boblina

    great poem! I'm a little confused about the rhyme scheme but still great meaning to this poem, I enjoyed it!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kelsey

    Very nice. It was very full of love.

  • 18 years ago

    by Hidden Sinx

    You can tell you are getting better with your poems. Good Job

  • 18 years ago

    by Bredada

    Great poem i love the way it was written god i hate when the 1st love leaves you dats how i felt but now i found my one true love

  • 18 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    I really liked the end to this poem...it really changes the mood of the reading. Good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by No Motiv?

    I really liked the end to this poem...it really changes the mood of the reading. Good poem.

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    It was a great poem and i can relate to it! I understood how you felt really well. keep it up :)

  • 18 years ago

    by midnight♥lullibys

    Aw this is so cute...just a tad sad...haha i rhymed....ah...ya..n/eway...great poem...the flow was kinda cute...5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by .

    This is a really good poem. 5/5 Deffinately! Keep it up ill be waiting to read more!
    Becky
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Jamie

    I really liked this one sometimes you broke the rhyme scheme and its not as good as your newer stuff but i still loved i think you have so much talent and i love that you have had love great job

  • 18 years ago

    by XxTeArSxX17

    Nice poem girl i know how oyu feel. and i hopr it get'd better for you 5.5

  • 18 years ago

    by SexMeister69

    I love all of your poems, sooooo gooooood! "Thats why i still love you"! LOL, nice poem, very well done!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wasted Fake Smiles

    Gosh i am so jealous. i wish i cood b half as good as u...i dun no wat u wanna b wen u get older..but i bet ull get a poem published no matter wat u do..u r so good. wow.!
    ~*Who Cares?*~

  • 18 years ago

    by amelia

    Beautiful
    touching
    deep
    intense
    are the few words i'd chose to comment on ur poem
    5/5
    love amy

  • 18 years ago

    by medicine:)ma

    Omg i love this poem so much and i can so relate to it is beatiful keep doing your thing is amazing